I know I've been posting a lot of stuff that isn't really writing relating, but it's still writing so that counts right?
To get back into the writing thing though, here's my token post for the writing totems!
Home
I can hardly remember
the woman who lived here before me
people speak of her
either missing her
or thankful that she's gone.
There is never a middle ground.
I find myself trying to remember.
wondering what she would have
felt as I watch the sun slip behind
the silvery mask of the moon
to be--for a moment--sacrificed
to the darker side, leaving only that
hint of brilliance
a flaming corona of light.
I wonder if she ever danced
naked- in love with Tchaikowski
or made love under the
warm summer sky.
I dreamed of her once you know.
She was walking through a forest
all white and shining
looking like a sacrifice.
The breeze took her then,
a lover wrapping her in an
invisible embrace until
she dissipated into glimmering
sparks and disappeared.
I am reminded of the pattern
of birth and death as I watch
the sun being released from
its lunar prison, and comforted
finally,
I am free to go home.
©Donna J. P. Riley
4 comments:
I love, love, LOVE that last stanza!!! Freeverse poetry is so delectable (sp?).
I finally had a moment to pop over and say hello after reading your kind words on my blog (via For the Love of Blogs). Your poetry is fantastic, you have a new fan!! I'll stop by often and hope you'll do the same. Can't wait to explore your site later today when the kids are napping ;)
Love it! Beautiful. I simply adore your poetry!
that was so lovely it gave me goosebumps!
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